Feedback On My Passion Project

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Hi Everyone,

I have finally completed my  passion project and now, I need to know what other people think about it. The people  who gave me feedback were Mikayla, my brother, and my dad. First, I actually can’t imply the feedback since I have already finalized the project’s film so I have only taken into account the feedback so that next  time,I know what I need to work on.

I  am only going to mention some of the feedback that Mikayla gave because she gave us feedback more than once at different stages. Since it  is now finished, I will give you the newest comments.


She said  that next time, I could maybe take more footage of us making  the actual things like a time-lapse. She also said we could of narrowed down our ideas earlier because we had  to modify  our ideas along the way a lot.


My dad said the same sort off things except he also said that maybe to make it easier for us, we could chose  one of the items we made but also make a film about it and just add more detail. I thought that was a good idea and I will be taking  that into account next time I get to chose my homework like  this.

And  my  brother just agreed with what the others said.


Like I said earlier, I kind of can’t change my project now since it has already been  completed so I am just taking this into account for next time.

Until next time, Bye Guys!

Passion Project Feedback


Hi Everyone,

My Passion Project is going really well and now, it is time to finish editing and get some feedback. So far, my partner Mikayla and I have gotten a bit more than half way through editing and now it is time to see what other people think about our film. We were partnered up with Jesse and Ben. They commented on the Diglet Pokémon pop up that appeared on the screen because it stayed there in the next scene and didn’t go away, cutting some clips to make them shorter, to move some of the audio and to get rid of the purple screen at the end.

Our film wasn’t finished so I knew that we would get tat type of feedback and now we have fixed it as much as we can.

We fixed it by cutting back the Diglet pop up to the right time, literally cutting back the footage to get rid of some bad parts of the scenes, and deleting the purple screen add in at the end.


Look out for my Editing post as I have just finished editing my whole passion project.