Powerful Sentences

My book of choice is “Zac & Mia”. It’s about two Australian teenagers who have cancer. The end up as hospital ward neighbours. He learns her blearing music or her foul mouth can’t stop them from thinking about each other even when they’re away. In his time of treatment for leukaemia, this was the first time he met a girl his age in this hospital with cancer. Zac’s cancer is more serious than Mia’s.  The book is powerful altogether I think and so far I would rate it a 9/10 but I have not finished.

“It’s funny how the brain does things like that. Your whole world is getting sucked up and tossed around and the best you can do is fixate on something small and unexpected.” – Zac Meier / A.J.Betts / Zac & Mia

I think this is a very moving and powerful if you think. He is getting better from a bone-marrow transplant that could save his life and he has undergone chemo and other things. He is stuck in this empty room filled with the smell of hand sanitiser and the worst part is when you hear someone has passed away. It would crush him. He had to leave all his friends, not conclude year 12 and under go all this. It’s like saying all he wants are the simple things.

The other way I came up with to say this:

Abstract and unplanned things are usually my point of interest. I’m sick of all this pain and this puts my mind into a daydream.

“At some point, you gotta stop looking at the sky, or one of these days you’ll look back down and see that you floated away, too.” – Paper Towns / John Green

I couldn’t choose between these two. I like this book also. There are lots of sites where you can find information about the book “Paper Towns” by John Green because it’s very popular. It’s a young adult book. I think it would be a great read for anyone but John Green has a stereotype for all of his characters. He may be good at writing but all of his characters are the same. Sometimes I think the girl protagonist is someone he loved when he was growing up or loves now.

I think this line is very powerful because it’s saying stop daydreaming, go have a little fun. Being happy is better than wanting to stop your death. You’ll find that you wasted your life, over something so bitter and annoying rather than having lived wild and reckless. I’d rather be wild as a storm than someone who has a plastic heart anyway.

The other way that I came up with for saying this would be:

Why are you just staring up at those clouds? Couldn’t you use your life, run reckless? Cause someday you’ll be up there, just wait; it’s something you can’t escape. We are born to live, not to wait for our stupid deaths.


Lightning Premiership – Win

I did Volleystars for my winter sport. I was in a team of 12. We placed 1st place in the competition. We played against Montpellier, Kardinia, Christian College and (I forgot whether or not) Chilwell. I really like my team cause we all work together really well. I wish there was more running though. Everyone had loads of fun during this event and I bet if we did it again everyone would be more confident and have more strengths like passing, serving, tapping. Things like that. I like Lightning Premiers.

Term 2 Reading Goals

What genres would you like to explore this term and why?

My goal this term for genre is to read some happy, comedy books. I tend to read very emotional, sobering and sad novels. I guess I just like them because of the feelings I get. I am also often told that I should read comedy not books that involve death, disappearance and sadness. I also read quite a few mystery books and liked them but never really went back. I plan on reading one of those too. I will read a fantasy book too, but the reason why I never really did before is the fact that things that aren’t real are things that always reoccur in almost every fantasy. Like magic and myths but I want to try it out again.

The genres I want to read this term:

  • Mystery
  • Comedy
  • Fantasy

What reading routine will you follow this term?

I want to read every night but sometimes I don’t have time so three times a week (out of school) in large parts. I will just increase the amount of pages I read if I miss one reading session.

How do you find out about new books?

I usually just search shelves in genres and ask for recommendations. Maybe see if an author you like has more books.

How many Reading Rants will you aim to complete?

About four a week, maybe five depending on how many books I read over this time.

How can you improve as a blogger about your reading?

Remember to add photos and always get my work in early.

The Disappearance of The Drone // Trailer

Mysteries happen everywhere in the world. Sea, land or air. There are many things science cannot explain. Here is a mystery that we came up with (my group and I).

First we discussed with everyone about different well-known mysteries and theories that are unexplained to science to this very day. We discussed The Loch Ness Monster, The Bermuda Triangle, Atlantis and other mysteries. The task was to get into groups. My group is Sophie, Angus, Sergej and I. We came up with many different mysteries but settled on a drone that went mysteriously missing while being flown by a student. The film needed to be 20 – 30 seconds long and not give too much away about our mystery. We also had to convince people that this is real. We needed good background music to set the mood. We could either have four photos or one picture and one video.

We needed to create a trailer for a film. Here are the stats for our film/trailer:

Duration: 32 seconds

Music: Illuminati Conspiracy Background

Picture: Illuminati Symbol

Editor: Angus

Actors: Angus, Sophie and I

Camera (Canon) : Sergej


This was so fun. We did disagree at times but it turned out okay.

I learnt how to position a camera from different angles and use them. I learnt that having natural movements/no tripod gives it an authentic look if your doing a POV (point of view). I hope we have more activities like this.

The Actual Trailer:






Cross Country 2016

Cross Country was an absolute blast! It was a great day and the weather was fairly okay with highs of 30 degrees+. The 12/13 girls ran 3km and ran last in the roster. All primaries were scheduled to run on Thursday.  We all got icy-poles if we finished the race. It was really fun to see everyone having fun while exercising. I’m in the house Helicon and we won with 600+ points from all our good efforts. I might post some pictures soon.

Helicon was victorious 🙂

Great Job everyone on your efforts for yesterdays great run. I hope everyone had loads of fun. Good luck at our next house event, House Music!


Helpful Hints For Inquiry

Recently in school we have been learning about photography, film and audio as our Inquiry focus. The film and audio required a short film to be made and the photography unit required a presentation of your learning through the notes and pictures that you took. We had two weeks learning about these focuses. While making these products we have learnt many different skills. I will be showing you my learning today in this blog post.


In this unit we took pictures using the notes we gathered from Ms. Torney and from instructional videos with quite a bit of context. We also learnt basic PicMonkey skills. We learnt mostly just colorings. Just playing around with cropping, brightness, saturation and angles.


Divide your frame into a tic-tac-toe boards and put your most important elements along those lines of the board. Place them horizontally or vertically on the lines or on the intersecting points.

There is always a foreground, background and middle ground.

When you want the landscape to dominate, put it on the top third. Flip it if you want the sky to be more important during sharing. The more interesting or important thing more weight on the image. If they are both interesting and important, place the horizon line along the middle (great for reflection shots). That is probably the only time you can break the rule. Make sure that the ninths are equal in length. Most cameras have a built in grid.

  • Allows you to unambiguously (without distraction) direct flow towards your piece.
  • It allows direct flow towards the pic
  • If the subjects were more centered, your eyes would travel everywhere, they wouldn’t know where to look
  • It lets you tell your viewer the most important/interesting elements


Leading Lines

In photography lines can make or break you picture. They have an incredible impact on feelings and atmosphere in the photo.

If your line is in the middle of the photo it cab cut the photo in half.

It will have a more impressive look and stronger composition if it starts at the corner of your photograph. Make sure that any lines are obvious. Leading lines can lead your viewers’ attention to the main point and prevent your eye from wandering. Line can make distance look further. Use your lines carefully though, it can move away from the main subjects.



Peace, calmness and a sense of restfulness.

They should be kept as horizontal as possible. Use the rule of thirds. They can strengthen the composition and create patterns.


Action, depth, stimulation. It can help draw an eye to a photo. Present it to the bottom left to the top right to use it best. It helps an eye scan.


Sensuality, elegance, serene sense of balance. The can be used as an s. Any form of a non-straight line can be called a curved line and be used in the same way.


Flow, depth, distance, scale, Our eyes naturally run along these lines where they connect, having them larger at the front and smaller at the end. This creates interest.    


Growth, power, dominance

Make sure to use the rule of thirds. They cannot start from corners.



Joy's PhotoThe idea is to block out the other parts of the scene with something bland. Maybe rocks, building or trees. It draws attention to the subject by blocking the edges to place your eyes on the most important part of the photograph. You isolate the best part and make your eyes see it. It gives it a sense of depth in the picture. It adds diminution into the pic. It doesn’t need to go around the full edge of the image. It can be anywhere on the edge. Just framing one or two sides is fine. A blurred frame will add more depth, while a focused frame creates context (more details and informative). Be aware that it can cause clutter, making the composition crammed and tight. Make sure the frame is defined and distinct. It should stand out from everything else. It does not have to contrast.

Negative and Positive Space:

Negative space defines the subject drawing your eyes towards it.

Area between and around objects in the photo. Sometimes called white space. It has been used in art, design, architecture and sculptors for years. It doesn’t take away from the main subject and is non-distracting. It draws your eye to your subject. It gives your eyes some space so that it doesn’t look cluttered and too busy. It defines and emphasises a photo’s main details. It adds up to a more engaging composition. When used properly it creates balance. It may be hard to create this. Keep in mind that some pictures look better with more texture. It’s basically a non-distracting background.

It is basically the main subject. Usually more interesting.

To overcome the problems of too boring, focus on the gaps around. This forces you pay more attention to your composition you don’t have to be scared of empty space. It can be amazing when you isolate the subject. Make sure the space balances. 


Where you put your camera to shoot can change the picture dramatically. It can make your viewer feel small or big. It can exaggerate the size of the subject and create moods and feelings. Eyelevel isn’t always the best view for your shot. By experimenting with many different perspectives will create many different images.


This unit taught us about various microphones and tripods. We also learnt how to use Corel Video Editing System further and use the equipment in production.

Audio can make or break your film. Amazing actors and cinematic cannot mask horrible audio. It doesn’t matter much if your actors are bad, or your cinematic skills suck, or your storyline is bad. If your audio is bad, people will not watch it. It might even be painful to watch. In my opinion cinematic and audio are the most important aspects of a good film. Good audio is smooth, clear, crisp and mood enhancing. Bad audio may be too loud, too quiet, static sounding or inaudible. Audio is very important for a film. Take extra care with your microphones and audio so that the film is enjoyable for your viewers. I’m not saying don’t take care with all your aspects, but more so maybe try and make the audio awesome so that your film is awesome too!

Also keep in mind what sort of microphone you use in your film. Here are some microphones and their uses.

Wireless Lapel:

Great for long shots, whispering, small talk, interviews and great for subtle voice projection. They are compact, easy to use and very easy to transport. You can use them for at least 25m from your receiver before it starts to fade. The quality is fair. You might have to be careful of it picking up breathing, movement and wind though.

Shotgun Microphone:

Used very often in short distance shots. It is named after the way the mic tends to pick up the direction it’s going and for minimizing background noise. Ideal for interviews, reports and single or small group scenes. These microphones come in some different sizes and variations. These are not very good for long/far shots because it doesn’t catch the audio.

Wireless Handheld:

They are very generic. It’s often held below your chin so that it’s not covering your actor/reporter’s face. They can be used for any type of shot. They are very easy to set up. It only has the receiver most of the time because the mic is the transmitter. Can be held up with stands.


This unit taught us about shot-lists

and scene names. We also learnt Corel Video Editing System to a degree and the basic skills of equipment. Every film has a start, middle and an end. There’s pre-production, production and post-production.

Shot-lists basically are planning out your basic shots, dialogue, order and thing you need to do in the shot. These help loads during production because you knew what you needed to get done. Much like when you’re making an animated movie, you make story-boards to show the basic idea of the film to keep it in order. These are very important because it reminds you and helps you keep on track.

We had groups of 4 – 5 and we made films/tutorials about how to do something we knew how to do or are skilled at. Our group chose a hair tutorial. Our group was made up of actors/models, camera people, editors and lights and area coordinator. It was sometimes challenging ‘cause there were five of us to keep in check but it all turned out fine in the end. We also learnt about voice-overs. We have to only be a fist away from the microphone.




Watching Words






The book I have taken this word from is called ‘Eight Keys’ by Suzanne LaFleur. This is her second published book


Synonyms: Entrails, organs, guts, viscera

The internal workings of a device or machine

Example: Cadence removed the innards of the cow and cringed.


These are from the book ‘Pookie Aleera is not my boyfriend’ by Steven Herrick. It is a book of poems about people our age at school.


To get rid of something/someone who/is no use to you anymore or no longer interesting.

Synonyms: abandoned, neglected, obsolete, dis-continued, forsaken, castaway

Example: The children discarded their school hats when playing basketball


Feeling and remembering something from the past. Sometimes evoked from objects or people. This can be any feeling.

Synonyms: homesick, romantic, sentimental, regretful

Example: Alexis felt nostalgic as she walked upon the streets of her old school. She remembered fairs and all her friends.


Various natural substances. For example, asphalt.

Synonyms: blacktop

Example: A few years ago the birds started dying after landing on these lakes and getting slathered in bitumen.


A disease that has high mortality

Synonyms: curse, epidemic, outbreak, invasion, influenza

Example: The plague in Egypt spread along the Nile. Causing a large outbreak.


  1. one of a breed of domestic pigeons
  2. any of various small birds having fanlike tails
  3. fantail goldfish

Example: The fantail goldfish swam around the tank, catching all of the sinking goldfish food


To smile in an affected, smug, or offensively familiar way.

Synonyms: laugh, glow, grin, shine, radiate

Example: Jason’s mouth turned into a smirk when he found out he had no school due to his fake sick day.


  1. a small valley or ravine originally worn away by running water and serving as a drainageway after prolonged heavy rains
  2. gutter or a ditch

Synonyms: gulch, defile, watercourse, gorge 

Example: The gully had water flowing through it to the end of the hill


  1. to mumble
  2. to grimace
  3. to sulk
  4. to mope
  5. an acute contagious viral disease of the parotid salivary glands, characterised by swelling of the affected parts, fever, and pain beneath the ear: usually affects children.

Example: Sally had the mumps. She had lost her favourite watch.


  1. a small portion
  2. a blob of a substance

Synonyms: piece, portion, bit, glob, blob

Example: Paris added a dollop of cream onto her apple pie. Her sister, Matilda, only had a small spoonful.


Setting Analysis

The Hunger Games // Book I Setting Analysis

In the near future, the nation of Panem (North America), 12 districts set forth a male and a female from the ages 12 – 18 for ‘The Hunger Games’. A harsh reminder and punishment of the residue of war that happened between them.


They are forced to travel to the Capitol. These 12 districts supply the Capitol, the rich people hub. The games take place in the Capitol, in an arena that is controlled by the Gamemakers’, administrations of the game and the government. The arena has a dome around it and the weather, terrain, temperature, area, barriers, natural disasters, plants, and time can change in a blink of an eye (this only applies in the domes field). The controllers can also send in weird animals such as mutated wolves. The atmosphere in the arena is very dramatic, harsh, sad and very brutal. The people there are very posh and wear very weird makeup combinations and have certain luxuries such as T.Vs, really good food, expensive houses, grand outfits. Usually people of high social standing live here. The government is situated here. They usually treat The Hunger Games as a fun T.V. show because it’s broadcasted on almost every T.V. in Panem. People in the Capitol do not take part in the games but do things like change the terrain in the arena with high-tech gadgets.  


The main protagonist; Katniss Everdeen was born in district 12. District Twelve is very, very poor. It’s the coal mining district. Her father died in a mining accident. District Twelve is also very commonly looked down upon by some of the other districts (usually one and two) and the Capitol. Most people compare the Capitol’s wealth and fame to District Twelve’s poverty and starvation. Katniss’ district is surrounded by a large wire fence that keeps the people from the forest. She says once “District Twelve; where you can starve to death in safety”. She is talented in Archery and uses her dad’s bows to hunt. It’s illegal for Katniss to use weapons like this by law, but she needs it to support her family. The law is very strict in Panem. There is a part of the town called ‘The Hob’ which is a black market. She trades her kills for strawberries and other things. Sometimes she just simply sells them.


It is very dramatic in there because in most circumstances only one out of twenty-four tributes survive and they get lots of luxuries. Some of the less poor districts have been training their whole life to win in the arena. Thats why the poorer districts usually don’t win often. The Gamemakers’ can also genetically mutate the creatures they put in. They can make wolves musclier, stronger and three times their size! They have a canon and at every nightfall and the number of times the canon sounds, is how many people have died that day.


Plot Analysis

My Life As An Alphabet by Barry Jonsberg 

Please don’t read if you don’t want slight spoilers.

Candice Phee is a girl living in the small town in Queensland, Australia called Albright. She’s a very unique twelve year old who likes to write pen-pal letters to her American penpal Denille, (who hasn’t replied once), has a pet fish called Earth-pig fish (who she and her Rich Uncle Brian won at a fair) and her best friend Douglas Benson From Another Dimension. She loves to make everyone happy and loves to fix everyone who’s broken inside. She is very, very honest and sometimes un-noticeably rude… But her intentions are the best from her surroundings. She has dark, ‘dirty’ blonde hair with freckles all over her body. She has no other siblings, an only child, but her mother is still saddened about her younger sister Sky’s cot death. Her father and his brother (Rich Uncle Brian) don’t get along. Her only friend Douglas thinks he was born in another dimension but is stuck in her world. He has also fallen hopelessly in love with Candice, and asks her to go back with him (which doesn’t end like he planned). He thinks jumping from a tree will take him back to his ‘space parents’ . He got injured but apparently it worked perfectly but he came back for Candice. Candice is scared of heights so he’s finding a way to get her back without heights After his recovery she finally got her pen-pals first letter. After her 21+ pileup of previously unread ones and Douglas cheesy love remarks..


Character Analysis


The book I am currently reading is Wonder by R.J. Palacio. I am re-reading this book for the third time but I love it so I don’t mind one bit. I highly recommend this book. If you’re looking for something very deep and eye opening read this amazing novel. Once done, I suggest reading Pluto, his childhood friend, Christopher’s, perspective and Shingaling which focuses on his classmate, Charlotte’s perspective. I have not read them but plan to.

My character analysis is on the main protagonist, August or Auggie (nickname). The character has “mandibulofacial dysostosis” or more commonly called a cleft palate or Treacher Collins syndrome. He also has many other face abnormalities. When the book started he was a 10-year old living in Manhattan. He is usually stared at and bullied for his features. That’s why Halloween is his favorite time of year. Other than Halloween occasions when he was younger he would wear a spacesuit helmet out in public to avoid rude staring and mistreating. His family members are (Oli)Via, Isabel and Nate Pullman (parents). They also have their dog Daisy.

His personality traits are..

  • shy
  • brave
  • intelligent
  • strong
  • sensitive
  • determined
  • introvert

I literally love this character. He is very misjudged by almost everyone in the book though. Except for his best friend Summer and after a series of change his fake friend Jack, also becomes his best friend. The main bully and antagonist is Julian, who often puts him down for his looks and is mean to him lots. He has 2 friends who he’s known forever and one special bestfriend called Christopher. He moved away though when they were 7. The first classmates he met were Charlotte, Jack and Julian. He’s been through lots in his life but he still was slightly keen on not doing homeschool and facing the real world more. It’s a really great story and has many great morals.