Hey guys, this is my subject post!
On friday we submitted our SECOND draft, but i didn’t do to much change it, because all i need to do is make a powerpoint showing my family, and my grandparents. I am struggling for the photos because my dad won’t answer my emails! :(, we also did a feedback session for period 1, and 2. The feedback i had was:
- Lots of names, who’s who?
- Making making it more hard hitting about the message
- The message needs to be stronger, also maybe the names, fix up a powerpoint to show who’s who.
For maths this week i went to TWO guru sessions, I went to Mr. Henderson first. So in his session we did portability, using a number line and things that could happen, so as: What is the Chance that it will rain tomorrow? there’s Definitely, Maybe, less likely, or definitely not. I chose maybe because it is 50/50 and it was cold..so i put that down onto the numberline.
Mrs.Stafford’s Guru Session:
In her session she was talking about the same thing almost, but it was about making fractions, using chance, we converted fractions into decimals. (sorry it’s hard to explain, i hope you got it anyways)
In writing i am currently Publishing a piece called: The meadow
it’s about all the senses i have about the fresh grass, the harsh wind, dust storms etc. i think i work better by the teacher showing a picture, then writing a seed or an actual piece about it. It’s hard thinking of a seed, when you have done one about your passion (netball) and sport is hard, and also about nature, death etc.
could you maybe write an idea in the comments?