On Monday the tenth of October year 6 went to the zoo and it was awesome. But we went there to make a film about a endanged animal I chose the Philippian crocodile. I Decided to lend my voice to this animal because it is a cool animal and the most endanged croc in the world and it needs our help. I used lots of different websites to get my facts especially the Melbourne zoo website.
When we got to the zoo we split up into groups and went to the location of our animal and got some footage and filmed our Peace to camera but when we went back to the meet up area we realized we had lost the cameras so we lost all of our footage but I got some of the other classes footage to put in my film.
When I started editing I got heaps of Emmys footage because I didn’t have any and Henry and I filmed our PTC in the green screen studio. once I finished my first draft I got feedback from my piers and I was told to turn down the music from basically everyone so I turned it down so you could here my voice over.
Then I got some positive feedback from my peers here is the positive feedback
i think it was really well put together and the song choice was really good and perfect loudness. just saying the croc looks like a tasty lasagne.-alex.
you made me really care about the animal. Spencer
i think it was incredible right and i liked your peace to camera🎈🎈🎈– olly
You film is very discriptive and has tonnes of information about the animal.-Camilla
Your voice over was clear it made me care about your animal. It was very descriptive. -Issy
Your P.T.C was great and I liked your voice overs also your music was really good and you made me care about the animal – Nick
The message was clear and your PTC was really good- Owen
i like the fact that you said and liked the pics.-sophie
I like how you said incredible right to emphasise a fact and how you called the crocodiles living dinos.
I like your facts and your music choice was really good- GusH
I think your footage really went well with everything, making everything better. Your music choice was really good for your film.-Mary B.
Here is my film